ГДЗ по английскому языку 10 класс Афанасьева Spotlight Базовый уровень страница - 20

### Итоговый ответ --- #### **Exercise 7. Understanding rubrics** ##### **Rubric A** * **Key words:** *email, pen-friend Ann, birthday party, what did you do, who was with you, gifts, New York next week, answer her questions, ask 3 questions, 100–140 words*. * **Target reader:** Ann, your English-speaking pen-friend. * **Type of writing:** Informal email. * **Reason for writing:** To reply to Ann’s email, tell her about your birthday party, and ask about her upcoming trip to New York. * **Number of main body paragraphs and topics:** * **2 main body paragraphs:** * **Main body paragraph 1:** Answering Ann’s questions about your birthday party (what you did, who attended, what gifts you received). * **Main body paragraph 2:** Asking 3 questions about her upcoming trip to New York. --- ##### **Rubric B** * **Key words:** *email, pen-friend George, best friend, what is he/she like, why, what do you do together, winter holidays, plans, answer his questions, ask 3 questions, 100–140 words*. * **Target reader:** George, your English-speaking pen-friend. * **Type of writing:** Informal email. * **Reason for writing:** To answer George’s questions about your best friend and ask him about his winter holiday plans. * **Number of main body paragraphs and topics:** * **2 main body paragraphs:** * **Main body paragraph 1:** Describing your best friend (personality/appearance, why you are close, activities you do together). * **Main body paragraph 2:** Asking 3 questions about George’s plans for the winter holidays. --- ##### **Rubric C** * **Key words:** *letter, pen-friend Michelle, town quiet and boring, what should I do, visit the city near our town, answer her questions, ask 3 questions, 100–140 words*. * **Target reader:** Michelle, your English-speaking pen-friend. * **Type of writing:** Informal letter. * **Reason for writing:** To give Michelle advice on what to do about living in a quiet town and ask about her visit to the nearby city. * **Number of main body paragraphs and topics:** * **2 main body paragraphs:** * **Main body paragraph 1:** Giving advice/ideas on how Michelle and her friends can spend time and have fun in their town. * **Main body paragraph 2:** Asking 3 questions about their planned trip to the nearby city. --- #### **Exercise 8. Model Email (Based on Rubric A)** **Dear Ann,** **Thanks a lot for your email. It was great to hear from you again!** **My birthday party was absolutely fantastic! We went to an adventure park and had a wonderful picnic there. All my close friends and family members were with me. I got some amazing presents, including a new pair of wireless headphones and a cool board game.** **It sounds exciting that you are going to New York! How long are you going to stay there? Which famous places do you want to visit first? Are you travelling alone or with your family?** **I must go now because I have to finish my homework. Write back soon!** **Best wishes,** **Alex** *(Объём: 114 слов)* --- ### Подробное объяснение и рекомендации #### 1. Анализ задания (Ex. 7) Перед написанием любого письма важно выделить: * **Формат и стиль:** поскольку адресаты — друзья по переписке (*pen-friends*), стиль письма всегда **неофициальный (informal)**. Допустимы сокращения (*I'm, can't*), разговорные фразы (*great to hear from you, cool, fantastic*). * **Структура основной части:** логично разделить основную часть на **2 параграфа**: 1. Ответы на все вопросы друга (полные и развернутые предложения). 2. Ваши 3 вопроса по указанной теме (прямые грамматически верные вопросы). #### 2. Структура неофициального письма (Ex. 8) 1. **Greeting (Приветствие):** *Dear Ann,* / *Hi George,* (обязательно с запятой). 2. **Opening paragraph (Вводный абзац):** благодарность за полученное письмо (*Thanks for your email*). 3. **Main Body 1 (Основная часть 1):** ответы на вопросы друга. 4. **Main Body 2 (Основная часть 2):** переход к новости друга + 3 вопроса по теме. 5. **Closing paragraph (Заключительный абзац):** ссылка на будущие контакты / причина закончить письмо (*Write back soon!*). 6. **Sign-off & Name (Подпись и имя):** *Best wishes,* / *Yours,* и на следующей строке имя без точки (*Alex*). #### 3. Чек-лист для самопроверки (Review & Revise) * **Объем:** уложился ли текст в рамки **100–140 слов**? * **Содержание:** даны ли ответы на все поставленные вопросы и заданы ли ровно 3 вопроса по теме? * **Стиль:** выдержан ли естественный дружеский тон без чрезмерно официальных фраз (*Furthermore, In conclusion* в дружеских письмах не используются).